The world is currently horrendous with the presence of a dangerous virus, the corona virus. The virus is a large family of viruses that can attack humans and animals. Corona virus is a virus that attacks the respiratory system. This disease caused by a viral infection is called COVID-19. Corona virus can cause disorders of the respiratory system, acute pneumonia, until death.Until now thousands of people have tested positive for the Corona virus. This virus can attack anyone, whether infants, children, adults, the elderly, pregnant women, and breastfeeding mothers. The first virus infection was found in the city of Wuhan, China at the end of December 2018 then. This virus is transmitted very quickly and has even reached Indonesia.
Actually what are the symptoms that arise when we are infected with this terrible virus?Covid 19 symptoms are generally in the form of fever 38 degrees Celsius, dry cough, and shortness of breath. when you are out traveling and 14 days after experiencing these symptoms then immediately go to the referral hospital in your area. At first it was suspected that the Corona virus was initially transmitted from animals to humans. However, after going through a lot of research then it was discovered that the Corona virus was also transmitted from human to human.To date 159 countries have been infected and total deaths have reached 10,031.While the corona positive number in Indonesia is 514 and the death rate is 48 people.
Many people are panicked about this situation, especially Indonesia, but there are simple things you can do at homebut there are some things we can do to protect ourselves by:
1. Wash your bag as often as possible both before eating, after eating, after or before from the toilet, after handling animals or after traveling.
2. When sneezing or coughing, don't forget to cover it with your elbow, handkerchief or tissue.
3. as much as possible avoid making physical contact with people who have contracted the corona virus
3. for now avoid the crowd like the market, bus stops, and so on.
4. don't forget to keep a distance of more than 1 meter between each other or what is called social distancing.
Here are some ways that I can convey on my occasion this time may be useful for us all. The hope of this world is to recover from this terrible virus. may God always protect us all, stay healty everyone
Hi Yulanda. It's a good essay. But, can you make justify paragraph?
BalasHapusOkay Icin thank you for suggestions stay healthy okay 👌
HapusHi yulan my bestie. I hope you always healthy . Btw,i like your blog but you shoil manage about capslock and then justify on ur essay. So far so good
BalasHapusThank you for suggestion Umiik, stay healthy and don't forget to wash your hands :)
HapusHi Yulan
BalasHapusWhat a great writing.
I'd like when you put your climing and evidencing at the same time.
And then, make sure your topic sentence. I thought, it's not really clear topic sentence at first paragraph.
For me over all good.
Keep it up!
And stay safe!
Thank you for your suggestion Sharizan I will repair it for the next essay.
Hapuswhat a cool tittle i like it😊
BalasHapusThanks Shela
HapusHello Yulanda, I hope you stay healthy.. It's a good essay yulan.. But, I found about your topic sentences still unclear and some grammatical errors. So, please make sure your topic sentences, and grammatical errors yulan..
BalasHapusKeep spirit, and stay safe 💜